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What my children say |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What my children say His bearded head rests on his chest Like an egg on a feathered nest. Moving hairs in a gentle flow Like wind blowing feathery snow. His eyelids work in active REM Phantoms objects moving them. Behind each lid is scenery A fantasy in greenery. Who knows the Camelot in store? Who knows which Gweniveer or more? Who knows the heart in freedoms fly? Who knows what love has caught his eye? He is a knight on lovers quest, With favor flying from his crest. He sits his horse in rhythmic beat. And all the world is at his feet. He's Galahad with all his air And never ever left his chair. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
love this Seymour ... great pace and feel ... well done ...< !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ma Miller, Bad title but thanks for the read and comment. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymore... This tells me a lot about you, as our children see us better than we see ourselves!! This was wonderful to read and beautifully written... ~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~ say ~~~~~~~~~~Never~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Enjoyed the comment, thanks for the read. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My friend, my friend .... what pleasant thoughts to have thought about you. I liked this line - 'He's Galahad with all his air And never ever left his chair' Enjoyed very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is delightful, Seymour! Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Hark do I hear Gweniveer? *L* Denise, Thank you for the delightful. *L* |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There you go again... with the dynamic couplet finale... Nice job, my dear friend...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you sweet Nan, *L* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, I like this one, Sy. Many of us are armchair Lancelots.....and then we stand up. Thank God for fertile imaginations  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my dear Sir wherefrom in your past did you once gaze on me when I was but a lass? For in my dreams I see you standing there forever will you be tall and true, of gallant air... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, Great comment, thank you. Sunshine, Just give me your favor And I will be your knight. *L* |
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