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Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA

0 posted 2000-07-21 11:41 AM


No more smile
No more laughing
No more anything

Just crying in my room,
I sit here tears comming down my face,
I wanna scream

My smile has disapeared today,
My laughing has gone somewhere,
I cannot find them all I do is cry

How can I live my life anymore
I guess I can't without a smile,
That smile was so good

I lost my smile when you left dad,
I lost my best friend and thats why no smile,
I don't wanna live anymore what's the point.

When you were here I alway's would smile,
But I guess you had to go
I miss you like when I have no chocolate

I don't see that smile on your face anymore,
You're probably are smiling in heaven though,
I'm not smiling I'm lonely without you,

       Until we meet again
         Love the ~*~Fairy Princess~*~  


((Peace out))
~*~Fairy Princess~*~

© Copyright 2000 Minna - All Rights Reserved
xoxoLUVRGURLxoxo
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since 2000-05-01
Posts 9
Corpus Christi, tx
1 posted 2000-07-21 12:54 PM


Ms. Princess
      I too also have lost a father but mine was in the worst way. You poem was so beautiful and touching. I am so glad you are able to share it with us.......

Fairy Princess
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 64
Fitchburg Ma, USA
2 posted 2000-07-21 01:13 PM


Hey. My dad would always call me his Little Princess, Fairy Princess, or Princess Minna. Thanks 4 reply
~*~The Fairy Princess~*~      


~*~What you see is what
you get~*~

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3 posted 2000-07-22 06:05 PM


FairyPrincess~
Honey, losing your father is a very sad thing.
Just try to remember all the good things that you remember about him and he will be with you always.

Great BIG *HUGS*.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2000-07-22 06:20 PM


This is a very honest and touching expression from the heart and I thank you for sharing it
I'm sure your Dad if he could see you now he would be so proud of the love that you show in the words you've written here.
Keep writing it is the best medicine for soothing the soul.....take care..ethome.

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