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Yesterday is Gone
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Yesterday is Gone |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Yesterday where did it go? I don't recall how many hours went by. I seemed to miss the singing of the birds. The sun shining bright. Yesterday is gone. Can you tell me did it shine? Was I blinded by some clouds? Were there rainbows with lots of colors. I just need to know for yesterday is gone. Somewhere I seemed to be hidden in the breeze. Do you remember were the stars twinkling as brightly last night? I watched for them, but still I must have missed them all. Even the shooting star that I wanted to wish upon. Today I thought back on yesterday. I have to say there was a gloominess in the air, still I have to say the thing that got me most of all was that the day went by, without much memory of it ever being here. I know it must have came because today is here and here I sit pondering on the semi-status of it all. Before I know it I'll be in yesterday again so I'll close my pondering for yet another day. But if you recall where yesterday has gone please say hello for me. [This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 07-20-2000).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Rosebud1229, Yesterday, where has it gone? I felt this when I read your poem. Such a lot of meaning about a lost yesterday, which will eventually become today. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thanks Bill I guess it just reminds me how fast time does go by I guess the longer you live you begin to comtemplate on how fast life is, I think back on growing up and wow that flew by in a matter of years it seemed now my kids are practically grown theirselves. thx for reply |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I enjoyed reading that...but I almost could feel what you felt. Very well written. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
THank you SO much Sauni I enjoy writing and I try to open up my heart to make it possible to relay my feelings sometimes I'm so overwhelmed I'm at a loss for words so I'm so glad you could relate and understand where I'm coming from. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseBud~ I think you captured 'yesterday' and wrote it for us all. Lovely remembrances of a day gone by too quickly ... as they all are prone to do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with Marge I think you captured the essence of yesterday.....great writing! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is a great title for a poem and it drew me right in. And then the awareness of what was missed and it is gone. A wonderful theme. Good writing Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh shoot! Now I have "Yesterday"'s tune running through my head...just what I needed...more Beatles music! I know what it is like to see the kids grown [and gone]... but do look forward, Rosebud, to all of your tomorrows...just don't wish them away! Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx for responses I do look forward to tomorrow and tomorrow and yesterday which seems to be today. Time flies when your by having fun. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice ending here |
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