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Slim
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since 2000-07-19
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Kentucky, USA

0 posted 2000-07-20 07:12 PM


Missing You

How I miss you so
and think of you constantly
you could never possibly know

I'm addmitting honestly that it's weird
having never met you
actually seen who you are
inside and out

Though we've kept in touch for a while
I still feel that I don't know you for you
I need a hint a clue
anything to let me know it's the real you i'm talking to
The person I share some of my deepest thoughts and feelings with

Oh, how I wish
wish that I could see your face
and move at a constant but steady pace
wish to hear the sound of your voice
and here i'm left with no choice
to neither rely on nor choose from

Tell me why,
why do things have to be as they are?
It's a question of fate that no one will ever know
It makes me feel low that I can wish on the same bright star,
and still never end up very far

I wrote this poem to tell you how I feel
but honestly it's not helping me
because I miss you still
I know that this may make me seem smart
but I want you to know that it all comes from my heart



© Copyright 2000 Slim - All Rights Reserved
Jeffrey Carter
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1 posted 2000-07-20 07:17 PM


Slim,

Welcome to Passions

And a very big BRAVO This piece is great

Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 2000-07-20 07:18 PM


Welcome to Passions Slim~  Hope the one
you wrote this for can see the love you
wrote with~

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2000-07-20 08:33 PM


Welcome to Passions Slim! Great first post ... I hope you were able to share this with your special someone!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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with you
4 posted 2000-07-20 09:49 PM


Slim~ Welcome!!   I really like this first post of yours, and will be looking for more.   -SEA

Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB



Slim
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 49
Kentucky, USA
5 posted 2000-07-21 12:19 PM


I want to thank everyone who replied to my first post. Me being as young as i am and new at my poetry i didnt know what to expect or how others would react to my writing. Thanx to all of you!!

^^Slim^^

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2000-07-21 12:55 PM


Welcome Slim...this is a lovely entrance, and one that many here can relate to...
Saunni
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7 posted 2000-07-21 02:08 AM


Wonderful first poem...I loved it!

Sauni

Sauni :)

A Romantic Heart
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8 posted 2000-07-21 02:46 AM


Welcome to passions! I loved your poem, it was so full of a hearts desire to be with the one it longs for! your emotions overflowed throughout!!!
poutprincess
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9 posted 2000-07-21 03:04 AM


Welcome! I look foward to reading more from you!  
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