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Missing You
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Missing You |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
Missing You How I miss you so and think of you constantly you could never possibly know I'm addmitting honestly that it's weird having never met you actually seen who you are inside and out Though we've kept in touch for a while I still feel that I don't know you for you I need a hint a clue anything to let me know it's the real you i'm talking to The person I share some of my deepest thoughts and feelings with Oh, how I wish wish that I could see your face and move at a constant but steady pace wish to hear the sound of your voice and here i'm left with no choice to neither rely on nor choose from Tell me why, why do things have to be as they are? It's a question of fate that no one will ever know It makes me feel low that I can wish on the same bright star, and still never end up very far I wrote this poem to tell you how I feel but honestly it's not helping me because I miss you still I know that this may make me seem smart but I want you to know that it all comes from my heart |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Slim, Welcome to Passions And a very big BRAVO This piece is great  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions Slim~ Hope the one you wrote this for can see the love you wrote with~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Slim! Great first post ... I hope you were able to share this with your special someone! Best wishes, /Kit |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Slim~ Welcome!! I really like this first post of yours, and will be looking for more. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
I want to thank everyone who replied to my first post. Me being as young as i am and new at my poetry i didnt know what to expect or how others would react to my writing. Thanx to all of you!! ^^Slim^^ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome Slim...this is a lovely entrance, and one that many here can relate to... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wonderful first poem...I loved it! Sauni Sauni :) |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Welcome to passions! I loved your poem, it was so full of a hearts desire to be with the one it longs for! your emotions overflowed throughout!!! |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Welcome! I look foward to reading more from you!  |
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