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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
too deep to sleep cought in thougts between my sheets past prose moonlight shows lessons behind tired eyes close into the conscious sub not stitute for my reality p.s. thank you for -your- poetry |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Very intense...but very well written. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Jaysun C...... I liked this very much!! And it is I who thank you for your poetry.....it's all give and take around here, and that's what makes this such a great place to be!!!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nice work here Jaysun C ... cought in thoughts cotton thoughts cool ... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I like this COOL never say never |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lessons behind tired eyes close... very very nice advice that... thoughtful bit of poetry here...I like |
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Jaysun C Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 56 |
thank you very much i enjoy being here i oops posted this poem twice oops its just as good the second time though sorry |
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