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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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I hit the floor and I taste the fibre, synthetic..... wish it would swallow me whole, so that I may become its substance unfeeling Dark Angel July 2000 |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This hit my heart with a "THUD".....so few words can evoke so much...This is a powerful piece D.A. you are a very talented writer~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Powerful feelings here, Dark Angel! Hugs! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
now, I am intrigued here...  quite powerful... led me to imagining several things... so must be a great poem then... regards, sudhir |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
agree with Sudhir ... powerful ... I want to know what made you hit the floor in the first place ... your poem drips of pain, but to not write about it keeps it hidden in your secret place ... sharing it will allow others to help you absorb it, reduce, eliminate it ... just my humble opinion ... you can tell me to bugger off now ... thanks. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Dark Angel......I just have to say that I agree with everything written above this.... Very powerful and emotional Love your work! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Dark angel a powerful piece, well written thanks for sharing< !signature--> the plot of our life sweats in the dark like a face the mystery of childbirth, of childhood itself grave visitations what is it that calls to us?" patti smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
left me wanting more................ Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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