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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Liquidity Of The Night ~*Marge Tindal*~ When the liquidity of the night opened up and swallowed me, I said, to no one in particular, "From whence did you embark to set this journey upon my soul ?" I expected, and received, no immediate answer. I dove again beneath the chasm of the velvet-draped thought that enveloped me. If there was a question, wouldn't it stand to reason that there should be an answer ? Thoughts now came in rapid fissure of fluidity. Kaleidoscopically focusing my mind's eye. Sketching me in all the colors of my palette. What now this light of brightness heightens ? Darker still the answers hiding from the questions. Suddenly the clarity of the knowing came, overwhelming me in it's simplicity. The flash of brilliance over as quickly as it began, Intuitively I knew I'd found the answer. The profundity was the glimpse of my own soul, of that there was no question. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Dearest Marge, I'm not sure how you pick from all your beautiful poetry, but I definantly love this one...so calming...just what I needed- but you always know what to do!! Love you... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wow, What a poem... Marge, I have read this twice in the space of minutes and the words kept and still keep pulling me in.... Amazing poem delivered with amazing grace... and lovely images... regards, sudhir |
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gem Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39 |
This poem made me see the colours of the rainbow!!!I think it's great!!! Gem |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge great images and such wonderful flow...A piece most greatful you shared thanks  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Truely wonderful. I especially liked the following: Suddenly the clarity of the knowing came, overwhelming me in it's simplicity. The flash of brilliance over as quickly as it began, Intuitively I knew I'd found the answer. The profundity was the glimpse of my own soul, of that there was no question. Great read. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marge, I do believe this will become a favorite of mine... ~~soft thanks for sharing Maureen |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So tenderly written Marge, I enjoyed it very much~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Not the first and not the last, but just right. The colors of your soul are beautiful...even I knew that! You know I love the poem! Hugs! [This message has been edited by Martie (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I LOVE this it is so beautiful, how do you keep producing such consistant and beautiful words. Do you never have an off day? Well maybe one of your off days would be one of my flashes of poetry.  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good stuff here.... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I loved this!!! The answer always lies within your soul. It is there, we just have to discover it. Very nice writing. You have my vote!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
absolutely awesome.... wow..such a cool poem... imagery and vocabulary choices are perfect very cool title and theme... excellent Margie-girl to the book it goes... jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Marge, this is stunning. The answers do indeed reside in one's soul...beautiful work, as always! *Krista Knutson* "You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." -Barbara DeAngelis |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ My thanks, gal. So good to see you. Sudhir~ I'm pleased it grabbed your attention. The way it fell to me is a mystic moment. Gem~ Thank you for the reply. Tracie~ Most appreciated that you enjoyed it. MarkB~ So pleased to know you like it. Maureen~ Thank you.ButterfliesDC~ I'm really glad you like it. Martie~ Oh, my friend ... you are such a sweet soul. Thank you for being there in the night to hear the story of this piece. You KNOW how much it means to be a friend and SIS ! Marsha~ What a sweet compliment. No, I don't think I've know a 'day off' since I started writing ... those little muses are always here ... to my pleasure. Karilea~ Thanks, my friend. This one came out of the night sky on a vision of soul-shaking proportions. Quite an experience. LoneWolf~ From the soul it came and that makes me happy to share it. JanetMarie~ Hon, this one flew in to rest in my mind, my heart, my fingertips and finally the page ... in such a rush that I wasn't at all sure who wrote it. Glad to know you enjoyed it. Krista~ Thanks, little friend. I so enjoy sharing with such wonderful people. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I think this might just be my favorite of yours "so far" Marge! Something about this verse just drew me in .. enraptured with the words ... beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I did enjoy this much Marge...reminded me of me again...grin...gotta love ya for that...you do it every time. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ I appreciate your thoughts. This was truly an awesome experience that dawned in me and I'm thankful that Martie was up to preview it for me and encourage me to post it. Serenity~ Wow ! If you experienced this one ... then I don't feel so out in left field. This one was a new experience for me ... it happened so quickly that I was not sure who had written it or where the phrases came from .... a new muse for sure. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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