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My chosen one
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My chosen one |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My chosen one She is no angel in disguise. But holds my eyes like butterflies. She paints no portraits of pretense But full of mystery and suspense. Has no dreams of moonlight schemes Does not ride the vague of dreams. She is to me a fragile dove. I treat her with respect and love. She's there as solid as can be, With all her grace and poetry. And I read her like an open book As pleasing as a crystal brook. Her presence stirs my heart within. And moves my soul to turn and spin. Amuses me when she is near And keeps my head a happy clear. Never a push, never a shove She is my love my turtledove. Her beauty stirs a lovers pride With affection I cannot hide. She waits for me each mornings glory My beautiful Alfa Centauri . |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymour.... I really enjoyed this love poem!!!!! And I have to admit, you got me with the ending!!!!! As Always, great job!!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey seymour, I rushed to reach the end of this... with anticipation and guess what, I was bowled over... quite cute... Alfa Romeo meets Alfa Centauri... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour I thought you'd found the perfect soul mate. Then the ending.......great poetry!! PS maybe that is the perfect soul mate?? |
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gem Junior Member
since 2000-07-18
Posts 39 |
Loved the poem! So deep..but then...love is...what you want it to be!!! Gem |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very funny, Sy You know, this ending did not surprise me, besause I might get a subtle glance, but the men in my circles can open the hood of a car and stare for hours at who knows what. But it was a great poem, Sy Loved it Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, Thanks for the great. Sudhir, Thanks for the cute. Ethome, It is second best. Gem, A gem of an answer, Elizabeth, As I said to ethome, it's only second best. Love Sy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well...you certainly, um, "waxed" poetic here sy! LOL |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Her presence stirs my heart within. And moves my soul to turn and spin. Amuses me when she is near And keeps my head a happy clear. - love epitomized. Corinne |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Her presence stirs my heart within. And moves my soul to turn and spin. Amuses me when she is near And keeps my head a happy clear. - love epitomized. Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, Thanks for the read and comment. Corinne, Enjoyed the double comment. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Pure romance, Seymour...  Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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