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Collins
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0 posted 2000-07-18 08:51 PM


Her Love was like the blackest swan,
swimming 'neath the midnight sun.
Gentley gliding through the lake,
I watch her movements,
the ripples she makes.
The circles extend until no more,
or get washed upon the pebbled shore.
Still she moves on without a pause,
Does this bird know the damage it's caused.




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Denise
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1 posted 2000-07-18 10:06 PM


I know many people who fit this description. No, I really don't think they have a clue and wouldn't care if they did. Beautiful images in this, Collins!  

Denise

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2 posted 2000-07-18 10:15 PM



You used beautiful imagery to describe such
a painful event.  Great work~

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