Open Poetry #8 |
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The black swan (repost) |
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Collins Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 57 |
Her Love was like the blackest swan, swimming 'neath the midnight sun. Gentley gliding through the lake, I watch her movements, the ripples she makes. The circles extend until no more, or get washed upon the pebbled shore. Still she moves on without a pause, Does this bird know the damage it's caused. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I know many people who fit this description. No, I really don't think they have a clue and wouldn't care if they did. Beautiful images in this, Collins! ![]() Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You used beautiful imagery to describe such a painful event. Great work~ |
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