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Prismed Tear ( my 500th post)
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Prismed Tear ( my 500th post) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Prismed Tear Teardrops fall from a heart now slain Ones that heal as some would say Brought to life from lost love's pain Emptiness and sorrow being swept away Clouds of memories parting your soul Shadows crossing through rays of light Flowing steadily across the grassy knoll Blue skies smiling as they take flight Sunbeams piercing droplets of tears Warming the salty cold of sorrow's taste Caressing light shining on hidden fears New hope and desire in which to baste Rainbows of happiness birthed in life's light Dispersing darkness as they come so near For nature will help with your life's fight As your sorrow becomes a prismed tear. Mark Bohannan |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
nifty package ... says volumes in few words ... well done, Mark ... Sunbeams piercing droplets of tears Warming the salty cold of sorrow's taste (killer line) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
So tenderly said Mark...beautiful writings Tracie~ Oh I nearly forgot CONGRATULATIONS on 500 posts  well doneLove is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--I like the hope of this beautiful poem...so well done and yes, I read it slowly, thank you.....and congratulations! |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I have to echo the remarks above, this is a beautiful piece. A wonderful choice for your 500th post!  "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just beautiful, Mark...sighs atchya...congrats on your 500....enjoy your work much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sunbeams piercing droplets of tears Warming the salty cold of sorrow's taste Caressing light shining on hidden fears New hope and desire in which to baste Rainbows of happiness birthed in life's light Dispersing darkness as they come so near For nature will help with your life's fight As your sorrow becomes a prismed tear. ================ Mark.... this is EXCELLENT... written from deep in your poets heart and soul... well expressed emotions... CONGRATS on 500... I will be willing to bet you a poem... you are one of the record holders for hitting 500 in such a short time...  thanks for so many sweet and encouraging replies to my work... your enthusiasm and love for poetry shows. later-on to 1000 posts-gator jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
An emotional offering this indeed and yes words very tenderly put and well done too ... Congrats Mark on the 500... My! That was quick... regards, sudhir |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Clouds of memories parting your soul Shadows crossing through rays of light Flowing steadily across the grassy knoll Blue skies smiling as they take flight Beautiful!!! Happy 500th! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
You captured soo much with this!!!! Congratulations on your 500th!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
MA Miller- thanks so much. Glad you liked it. tracie66-Thank you much. Martie- Thank you for your inspiration and a slow read is a good read. LoveBug-Thank you for your kind reply. serenity-Thank you so much for the sigh. jm-you of anyone knows the addiction that poetry has over me and I thank you so much for your "SWEETNESS" in all you share in both your work and your reponses. I want the poem win or lose on the bet. Sudhir-You hopefully know the inspiration that you have given me and how much I value your words. The quicknes comes from not being able to stop reading all the wonderful poems here at the forum many of which are yours. Jan-Thank you very much. Bridgette-Thank you for your always kind replys. |
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Adrienne Junior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 20California |
Aaahh... A divine way to express sorrow, with hope trailing it's way right behind, not giving up. Congrats on your 500th!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mark~ Many reflections in this lovely piece. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Mark* This is so perfect!! I love the imagery and the feel of this piece~ Congrats on the 500 and here's to 500 more |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mark, it's appropriate that you should post such an excellent piece for your 500th. I'll bet your 1000th will be grand! Congrats!! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Mark! Congratulations on 500! Denise |
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Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
this is really great |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Mark...this is so breathtakingly lovely...and as beautiful as you said it would be... never say never |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Adrienne-Gotta try and keep that reason to fight alive. Glad you liked it. Marge-Thank you so much. Bdc-your responses always leave a smile on my heart. Thank you so much. Balladeer-I shall do my best not to disapoint you in three weeks with my 1000th. Denise- Thank you. I am glad you found the beauty in it. Kyle- Thank you and I will be reading more of yours as I go. Paula-I don't know if I hit all that I was seeking for but I at least got a piece of it. Thank you dear one. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Mark CONGRADULATIONS!!!!!!! You have made our family here more complete!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marina- thank you all for allowing me into the family...And thank you for all of your kindness. |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~You capture me with your poems but this one has outdone the rest...It was wonderfull. Congratulations on your 500th post. This was very well done..I can only say now I look forward to reading more of your touching and heartfelt poems~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
"Warming the salty cold of sorrow's taste" ...a beautiful line, lovely piece of writing. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beth-Thank you so much for your wonderful reply. I enjoy yours as well and it feels good when one of mine touch even just one soul. Claire-Thank you much. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a delicate and beautiful piece, congrads on the 500th post. You have celebrated it beautifully with this poem. why must we pray screaming? why must not death be redefined? we shut our eyes we stretch out our arms and whirl on a pane of glass-patti smith |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A beautiful piece of writing here Mark and Congratulations on your 500th post. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I love the title Mark, it drew me there right away.....Marvelous poem! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Brian-Thank you for the wonderful reply. Dark Angel-Thank you for reading and your comments. Ethome-Glad you liked it and once again thank you so much. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Beautiful! I could see that prismed tear, the colors of love shinning through the pain! Loved it! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Congratulations on your 500th Mark! This was a wonderful poem to mark this milestone ... so full of inspiration and light. Beautifully penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
RH-thank you so much. I am glad you could see the rainbow of colors. Kit- Thank you much. Glad you enjoyed it. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I had to read this one more time....its just as beautiful this time never say never |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Paula-Some tears never dry. Thank you so much. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I enjoyed this very much and congrats on your 500th post...... Julie :) |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Julie-glad you liked it and thank you much. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is excellent for your 500th Can't wait to see your millionth post too! LOL Congratulations! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
It is wonderful to be able to look back and see that, even though your poetry is amazing, you have still grown as a poet. Beautiful title, Mark, and the poem does it justice. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
God that's beautiful! |
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