Open Poetry #8 |
Labour Of Love |
Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
Love you now Love you tomorrow Wait today Wait tomorrow Would a lifetime of love Be returned? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth..... This is a great piece.....I like the ending question.....it imparts that doubt we all have in matters of the heart...... ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Sunny1..I think the question is most important..A Lifetime of love probably couldnt be returned but its nice to think.. Thanks for your constant replies..I appreciate them~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Would a lifetime of love be returned? Good question Beth Liked this much |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So much said in so few words and the question is perfect. Loved it much. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So many questions go along with the mystery of love and so few answers.....Well done~ |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
love simple ... nice verse, Beth ... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Dark Angel, Thankyou for your reply. Im glad you liked it~ ~Mark, That is the million dollar question. Thankyou for your sweet reply~ ~Butterflies_dont_cry~ Love doesnt seem to provide many answers when you want them (lol). Thanks for your reply~ ~MA Miller, Thankyou for your reply. Its good to see that you liked it~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
oops..sorry...double posted! [This message has been edited by poutprincess (edited 07-19-2000).] |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
this one just about slipped past me! its great! youve always been good at asking those important questions! youre the best Beth! |
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