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You Travel Back |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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You Travel Back ~*Marge Tindal*~ On increasing waves of memory you travel back to dwell in me Soft upon my brow you rest furrowing now my thoughts digest Laying easy on my mind memories once thought left behind Velvet petals now are pressed upon this heart with memory blessed Caress so feathered upon my cheek gently lulling me into sleep Eyelids laced with sleepy-man sand I reach out to take your hand Enfolding quilt of softest down wrap me in your soft surround Slumbered deep in satin-memory you travel back to dwell in me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
what a sweet trip down memory lane...beautifully said never say never |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Marge, my dear, you still ROCK!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Just wonderful. *L* |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Marge, Another beautiful stroll down memory lane. "Laying easy on my mind memories once thought left behind Velvet petals now are pressed upon this heart with memory blessed." So very tender.... Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thank you. It is a trip we all take lovingly. Jeffrey~ I'm glad that you think so ! ! !  Seymour~ 'Wonderful' from you is just right ! *Hugs* Bonnie~ I'm pleased you took this stroll with me. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Oh how I love the journeys you take us on. This is beautiful once more. Thanks for the read. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I love the way you weave those words Marge..beautifully done Luv Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
~sigh~ I love where your workds take me. Beautiful as always. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ Thank you. The journeys often catch me by surprise. Tracie~ Many memories weave in and out along the paths. Thank you. Jan~ Glad to catch your *sigh*. Thanks so much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ How'd I miss this gem?? Geez, I am slipping here!!! LOL. I always thought you could never go back, but now I see you really can. Beautiful images my friend. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, Wonderful poetry here my friend, I have a couple I like to dream about thanks for sharing, Love ya, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ You can ALWAYS go back on the wings of a thought of love. Thank you my friend. Cerenity~ What better way to be remembered than in the dreams of a heart who loved you. Glad you enjoyed it, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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