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Ode to a toad
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Ode to a toad |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A rewrite. Ode to a toad Lily pads float waters lagoon Below a pillowed sexy moon Nomads of toads all Galahads Croaking their love waiting unclad. Flamboyant they gloat their power, Offering flowers on the hour. They are the knights of the night Pawing ground to ladies delight. Crooning a tune of male ensnare A toady song beyond compare. Horny for the closure of mate Below a rapist moon of fate. Bold and constant is their sweep Calling out their passions rebeep. Bringing the nights fraternity Within fruitions destiny. From their throats they blow natures damn Frantically calling, here I am. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Not too many people can make toads sound sexy, my friend! Love the "pillowed sexy moon"! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Seymore...... You caught me with the title, and after reading, I rediscovered a childhood love of frogs!! This was great reading, and you really DID make a toad sound sexy!!! Think I'll go kiss one! < !signature--> ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-18-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, If it turns into a prince let me know. *L* |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow so is this Toad single? lol no serious that is one sexy toad and one sexy poem I wonder if you kiss the toad will it turn into a prince or a princess. Wonderful poem Seymour "Out of sorrow entire worlds have been built Out of longing great wonders have been willed They're only little tears, darling, let them spill" Nick |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Hey there,...definately dug the "pillowed sexy moon" line. The entire poem infact is so well written. Very neat of you. Be well ST. *Peace. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Brian, Don't know about the kiss, you'll have to find out for yourself. Spit Fire, Thanks and beware of the pillowed moon. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOOHOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Now this one really surprized me Sy. You did a remarkable job  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, Only you could make this subject matter into a brilliant and exquisite poem. Liz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The long and winding toad...........that leads me to your door.......Aw makes me think of 'Watership Down' in a fantasy type of way........good work Seymour keep em coming...... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy--this is wonderful! Mr Toad has always been one of my favorite ...er people...ah characters... Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are the King Bullfrog ! You'd be welcome on my lily pad anytime !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
What a marvel... Seymour, this is one great poem here... regards, sudhir |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Jeff, Thanks for the WOOHOO. Elizabeth, You are one sweet lady. Love Sy ethome, Enjoyed the comment. Martie, Thanks for the great. Marge, Where is your lily pad? Great cartoon. *L* Sudhir, Thank you for the marvel. |
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