Open Poetry #8 |
You Don't See... |
Kyle aka Huck Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 63Linn, MO USA |
I'm a poor child, Life all so wild. 17 and I'm told, I have a heart of gold. If that's true then answer me this, Why is my life an endless abyss? No where to run, Got to escape the burning sun. No where to hide, I'm taken for the lonliest ride. Divorce did my Mom and Dad, Makes me so so sad. Confused as am I, Hard enough I did not try. And you don't see, That you ignore me. And you don't see, I need you both with me. You just don't see... How much this affects ME. You can't see.... |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I cant say I know what your going through but i can imagine...My heart goes out to you..I hope everything works out well for you too..This was very sweet.. Enjoyed it greatly~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
although i can not relate to the divorce aspect, i do understand a child's need for love and attention from their parents. you write your emotions so well...be sure that you are able to share these same feelings with you mom and dad...make sure they hear you. and i'll be here listening as well. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well, dear, how could we not? This is nice....I thank you for sharing and welcome... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
My wife divorced me and took off with my three sons and it was a very stressful period of time for everyone involved. I was able to visit them but it is not the same as having the family together...still have sad memories today as I am sure they have...you can only do the best that you can under the circumstances...hope you are doing o.k... James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
mom hears and understands more than you give her credit for i bet never say never |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
A soul filled piece...life at 17 never seems easy but you have many added bumps in your road...my condolences for the recent loss of your friend...Big ((Hugs)) for this piece and for this difficult time in your life~ |
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