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the electronic eye |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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the electronic eye is asleep. the electronic mind is dreaming. the electronic soul is cold. the electronic hands are moving. the electronic eye is open. the electronic mind is searching. the electronic body is growing. the electronic fingers are pointing. the electronic soul is wavering. the electronic throat is vibrating. the electronic lungs are beating. the electronic heart is pumping. the electronic voice is speaking. the electronic eye is blind. beware-beware-beware-beware. beware the electronic eye. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
The electronic eye is everywhere..Great poem!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and some suffer from electronic cataracts...and an electic winkie-wink eye atchya!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
  heres looking at you BSQ  very cool poem ... at least with this piece of technology i can keep an eye on your poems later-"big brother"-is watching gator me There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I liked this alot...i think it would make an excellent heavy metal song....I could hear Matallica singing it......With of course alot of electric guitar between the verses....Great JOB!!! Julie :) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks, everyone. And JulieAnn, if this were a Metallica song, it'd need to whine about Napster and then explain how all creativity peaked after Master of Puppets was out; by the black album, they decided radio was a friend. Mike |
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