Open Poetry #8 |
Forever Burning Flame |
Jacques Lee New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9 |
Forever Burning Flame The generous things that you say and do, have earned a special place in my heart. So nice a feeling or a thought even though we are so far apart. A sad feeling of wanting you near suddenly brings about a tear. A tear without fear of being hurt falling upon my face. But a tear of happiness. A meaning, a true meaning; to give and receive. To cherish, always and forever, what it is we both have to give. The love within us, buried so deep. Surfacing once again, now a burning flame to burn forever. Burning to brighten the darkest night. To see you from within brings about a change. A change that comes over me; for the better; surely you can see. Thinking… Admiring… The fire from the flames burning within me; so good a feeling. A meaning, a true meaning, to give and receive… I am hoping the heat from the flames last forever. I forever want them to last with you. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is a beautiful poem about the love flame that burned before now again within rekindled to burn forever. Welcome to passions |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I hope that flame will burn brightly for you forever, Jacques...... I love your writing with it's sensitivity and beautiful emotion!! ~~~~~Live for Today~~~~~ taste every single moment |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hi Jacques Lee welcome to Passions...this is James Lee...this is tender writing...I believe admiration is very important in a relationship as it motivates us to continue learning about the one we admire...James |
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Jacques Lee New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9 |
I wish to thank each of you for your kind words. Often time we find ourselves searching for something and that something may never be found. However, when we do find that special something, we surely want it to last. Again, thank you. J. |
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