navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #8 » I Am Afraid
Open Poetry #8
Post A Reply Post New Topic I Am Afraid Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Jacques Lee
New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9


0 posted 2000-07-16 12:46 PM


I am Afraid


Why should one be afraid?

I ask myself.

To truly love someone deeply and express how you

   feel is very true from the heart.

So from the heart when repeated, “I love you",

comes deep from within…a feeling--a feeling of true

meaning.

A meaning never explained before.

To seek thoughts of ambition and eagerness to love

is just closeness building.

Is there an exact way to be true best friends male

or female?

The foundation of friendship is strong and

continuing to grow.  A “Relationship” is truly

within me.

I feel everything inside is so true.

Truly to believe…  To believe and care…

   Caring to share my relationship with you.

I love you.

For now, “I am not afraid”.




© Copyright 2000 James Lee - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-07-16 12:52 PM


Having those talks with yourself is a wonderful way to arrive at a final conclusion.
Very well done I appreciatied where you're coming from...

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
2 posted 2000-07-16 04:12 PM


Jacques Lee......

        This was written beautifully!!
    It's ok to ask yourself questions...
    How else are you going to find the
                answers?

          I loved this piece.......

       Oh, By the way.........

                  Welcome to Passions!!!!!!

< !signature-->

Live for today and enjoy the moment.....



[This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 07-16-2000).]

Jacques Lee
New Member
since 2000-07-16
Posts 9

3 posted 2000-07-16 11:27 PM


I really appreciate the comments I have heard thus far.  Inspiring.  Thanks!  J.
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-07-17 01:29 AM


Jacques~
Welcome to Passion's family of friends and poets.
Fear not ... we don't bite or anything !

I enjoyed the questions within your rhyme.
Hope to read more from you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com



Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #8 » I Am Afraid

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary