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Dreams and Wishes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Dreams And Wishes Dreams and wishes go hand in hand Without the dream the wishes fade And without the wish, well you understand Love and trust walk side by side Trust is love's other name you know And love without trust is a careless ride Dreams and wishes live together Without dreams vision the wishes falter And without wishes zeal there's no forever Trust and love share a single thought Love pushes trust when life is dreary And trust without love just can't be bought Wishes and dreams belieive in love Dreams rely on the wishes hope And wishes need dreams tender love Love and trust believe in dreams Trust relys on the love freely given And love needs trust it seems |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done Marsha! "Trust is love's other name you know and love without trust is a careless ride. Without dreams vision the wishes falter and without wishes zeal there's no forever." Great lines and wise thoughts! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
very very beautiful thoughts here enjoyed this poem well written Marsha  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Somehow I missed this little gem of yours. Dreams and wishes just seem to go hand-in-hand if we're fortunate. A delight to read and enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha..... I loved this!! '..love without trust is a careless ride..' Oh, so true!! This really is great...... Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
ethome thank you, Being one of this family is really helping me to learn and grow. Rex thank you, your writing particually inspires me, I wrote this after reading In Loving You. So it's thanks for the inspiration.  Marge your writing is so real to me that I think I must get some tiny spark of truth from a kind of osmosis, from reading your work. Thank youSunny1 thank you, I try to write with feeling and in this one I think I may have got a tiny bit across. Glad you liked it [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 07-16-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
dreams and wishes are what give us life they give us hope and give us light. . . wonderful poem Marsha. . . just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree wholeheartedly! Great wisdom in this, Marsha! Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you sven glad you liked this.  dg I'm so glad you liked this, the sentiments are true for me and I hope they strike a chord with others. Thanks  |
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