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Sven
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0 posted 2000-07-16 01:34 AM


Star shine
Love glow
Only your heart
I long to know

Moon glow
Love shine
If only you
Would please be mine

Gentle heart
Tender light
Save my heart
From this dark night

Lady love
Maiden fair
I thy Knight
Lay my soul bare

Battle fought
Heart won
For thou art
My only true sun

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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Australia
1 posted 2000-07-16 04:03 AM


Sven you truly are the master of romance....lovely piece
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-07-16 07:46 AM


not fair...you knew I'd like this one...

Sven, show us some of your bad stuff, if only for comparison...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
3 posted 2000-07-16 08:47 AM


This is beautiful, I love it.  
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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4 posted 2000-07-16 11:50 AM


Sven.....

  'You really are a modern-day knight
  Your armour aglow, 'tis shining bright
  You win the hearts of maidens here
  by words of love, and thoughts sincere..'

       Everything you write is beautiful,
         and always a joy to read!


Live for today and enjoy the moment.....


ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2000-07-16 11:57 AM


Beautiful romantic piece Sven.

All those lines so romantic.."Star shine...
Moon glow...Gentle heart....Lady love"....never fail when presented in such a classic style.....Great work!

Marina
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario
6 posted 2000-07-16 01:26 PM


Another beautiful romantic piece Sir Sven.  What are we going to do with you??    

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Sven
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7 posted 2000-07-16 05:33 PM


Thank you all. . .

tracie, thank you very much. . . but I'm no master. . .  

Sunny. . . you know, I really did know that you'd like this. . .    But if you really want to see some of my bad stuff, hang on a minute. . .

Lost Dreamer, thank you!  

Sunny1. . . everything??  Well, I don't know about that. . . but I'm glad that you liked this one. . .

ethome, thank you for your words. . .

Marina, I would say that I should be drawn and quartered!!     Thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
8 posted 2000-07-16 10:43 PM


How would you like to be drawn......clothes on or off??  LOL  

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


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