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Star Shine. . . Maiden Fair
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Star Shine. . . Maiden Fair |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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Star shine Love glow Only your heart I long to know Moon glow Love shine If only you Would please be mine Gentle heart Tender light Save my heart From this dark night Lady love Maiden fair I thy Knight Lay my soul bare Battle fought Heart won For thou art My only true sun ------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven you truly are the master of romance....lovely piece Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
not fair...you knew I'd like this one... Sven, show us some of your bad stuff, if only for comparison... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is beautiful, I love it.  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sven..... 'You really are a modern-day knight Your armour aglow, 'tis shining bright You win the hearts of maidens here by words of love, and thoughts sincere..' Everything you write is beautiful, and always a joy to read! Live for today and enjoy the moment..... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful romantic piece Sven. All those lines so romantic.."Star shine... Moon glow...Gentle heart....Lady love"....never fail when presented in such a classic style.....Great work! |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Another beautiful romantic piece Sir Sven. What are we going to do with you??  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you all. . . tracie, thank you very much. . . but I'm no master. . . Sunny. . . you know, I really did know that you'd like this. . . But if you really want to see some of my bad stuff, hang on a minute. . . Lost Dreamer, thank you! Sunny1. . . everything?? Well, I don't know about that. . . but I'm glad that you liked this one. . . ethome, thank you for your words. . . Marina, I would say that I should be drawn and quartered!! Thank you my friend. . .--------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
How would you like to be drawn......clothes on or off?? LOL It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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