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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-07-15 06:55 PM





~*~
Moon glow
of such great delight
waltz me across the sky
this night Ever in your glow
contain me Lend your light to
gently reign me In the aura
of your beams Light within
my waiting dreams Moon
of wonder and delight
Shine on me
~*~






~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-07-15 07:00 PM


Oh Marge.....

           You do such wonderful things!!!!
   Your words are so smooth....they flow
   perfectly, and I just have to say that
   I'm in awe of how you do the layouts!!
       I've got a lot to learn here!!!

            Thank you for your artistry,
              both verse and graphic!


Your words become music to my soul......



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2 posted 2000-07-15 07:14 PM


~Marge,...you've got me singing, 'this little light of mine'.  How lovely a poem you've made. I'm smiling. Be well. *Peace.
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3 posted 2000-07-15 07:48 PM


~*~
~*Sunny1*~
likes the moon that
glows way up in the sky
She likes the glowing rays
as it waltzes right on by
Please, Oh Sunny 1, why
does it please you so ?
Tell me why does it
set you aglow
~*~


~*~
SpitFire
This little light
of delight I'm gonna let
it shine Just to send a glow
to a friend of mine This little
light of mine Sent to spread
a smile For just little while
I'm gonna let it shine
Let it shine just
for you
~*~


*Thank you both for your delightful replies !
~*Marge*~


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Lone Wolf
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4 posted 2000-07-15 08:52 PM


Marge~

You have captured the esssnce of the moon in your words.  This was beautiful my friend.  I must say, I love the moon!!!!!  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

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5 posted 2000-07-15 09:17 PM


Marge, I can't think of anyone else I would rather be mooned by!

This is beautiful  

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6 posted 2000-07-15 09:31 PM


~*~
Lone
Wolf howling at
the moon Shining with
delight Filling me with words
of praise She thinks I did it
right I am full of joy at this
compliment from your pen
Thank you always for
replying to me
my friend
~*~

~*~
LOL
at Balladeer
Thinks that he's
been 'mooned' I've
just started glowing
so don't go away
too darned soon
Love you
~*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Trew
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7 posted 2000-07-15 09:51 PM


Geez Marge, is there a style you don't master?
You are an inspiration for diversity; the more I read, the more I write.
Still basking in the moonlight...  

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8 posted 2000-07-15 10:00 PM


~*~
Oh Trew
I'm glad that you
enjoy the things I do
Pleasing readers pleases me
Makes me write better poetry
Thank you for the sweet reply
I will keep on writing if you
promise you will keep on
reading and smiling
Thanks again
~*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2000-07-15 11:17 PM


and another faithful fan smiles, mooned by beautiful poetry
Denise
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10 posted 2000-07-15 11:37 PM


Your talents glow brightly, Marge!  

Denise

tracie66
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11 posted 2000-07-16 04:15 AM


My smile is glowing as brightly as this little piece of yours Marge...a most delightful read   thanks
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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12 posted 2000-07-16 05:26 PM


~*~
Kaile
A little moon
glow to light the
night Seems to be
in everyone's sight
Grinning at the
reply of you
~*~

~*~
Denise
It just seems
to be so very true
The moon is glowing on
friends so new Brightly
shining on old ones too
Just like me and you
Shine on Moon
Glow
~*~

~*~
Tracie
Thank you for
kindly sharing the glow
that the moon is wearing
Friends within her beams
do shine Bright in this
full heart of mine
Moon Glow

~*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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ethome
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13 posted 2000-07-16 05:41 PM


Marge I don't know how you do it but I'm glad you do. Everytime I read some of your work it gives me a shot in the heart and mind. I get a great lift out of your energetic poetic attitude.
Man those are great moon shaped poems...only you Marge. Take care.

WRITE ON FAIR DAMSEL!!!

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~*~
ETHome
Shot in the heart
by a 'luna' lover Only
then did he discover
the Moon Glow was
his undoing
~*~




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Lady Web
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15 posted 2000-07-16 06:06 PM


Well you done it again.
I must admit, I do think this one was kind of fun, huh.
Very nice twist with the shape and color.


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16 posted 2000-07-16 08:11 PM



~*~
LadyWeb
What a delight
to find you in the
Moon Glow of the
night Glowing in
the light
~*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sudhir Iyer
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17 posted 2000-07-17 05:41 AM


Marge, you are so wonderful with moons... wow what a wonderful work... as always...

... so inspiring.... here is my crescented moon.... trying to share the spotlight

                                                  Celestially slivered
                            moon in her crescent
                 form called out my name.
       Upon hearing my name
   announced in whispers,
I glanced into the nights'
Clouded darkness, and
Through the clouds, I
Saw the most luminous
Divine halo. She shone
   Bright, shadows aglow
       by reflected light from
               the sun. Her eye winked
                              most invitingly and
                                       smiling. I blinked




[This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-17-2000).]

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18 posted 2000-07-17 08:42 AM


Marge this is absolutely asoundingly amazing.
Perceptive people will see I LOVE IT. Those not so perceptive will just think I like it.
You are a star among the darkness.  

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19 posted 2000-07-17 08:39 PM



~*~
Sudhir
I'm so pleased
to have inspired you
to hang crescent moon
Your thoughts are so
glowing with pride
a great effort
GLOW
~*~

~*~
Marsha
Awwwwwwwww!
I'm so glad that
you LOVE it and
your perception
shines with a
Glow
~*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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20 posted 2000-07-18 03:18 AM


MT,you've mooned
everyone with your
lovely poem.

Well done!


Gossamerwings ;)

Kit McCallum
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21 posted 2000-07-18 07:35 AM


Do you know that this was simply devine???  

I loved your theme in this Marge (not to
mention how you've carried it through so
brilliantly in all the replies).

Beautifuly shimmering verse!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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22 posted 2000-07-18 08:24 PM


~*~
GossamerWings
Thanks so much for
your sweet reply and
welcome to the family
of friends where all
things shine so
brightly
~*~

~*~
Kit
Oh, what a
nice sweet thing you do
when you reply as you do
Setting a'glow the heart of a
poet is such a reflection of who
you are - and in the eyes of
this observer - you glow
as brightly as the
Moon does
~*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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23 posted 2001-06-29 11:15 AM


A tiny share for Sudhir~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

Sudhir Iyer
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24 posted 2001-06-29 11:48 AM


Thank you muchly.... my dear friend...

regards,
sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

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25 posted 2001-07-15 01:52 AM


Marge, this is lovely  

Hugs2uSweetie
*~coco~*

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26 posted 2001-07-15 10:52 PM


Sudhir~


CoCoBaci~
Goodness .... hard to believe this was written a year ago !
Leave it you, sweet archiver !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                 noles1@totcon.com              

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