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Few Hold On To It (Love)
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Few Hold On To It (Love) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Few Hold On To It (Love) Love has said to be the greatest of pleasures, but the total sum of souls that have possessed this prize of all prizes and then lost it is not countable by a humans own power. I know of someone that possesses an unconditional love for all. Never showing their own needs or wants for this would render there greatest gift valueless. I asked them were they found the unlimited love they possessed, in return the words were spoken, it pulsates through my heart which then flows through out my body and then is given to all I meet upon this earth. I asked another question, what happens to those who do not take the love so freely given, and they replied I give until it hurts. They smiled at me and said if I could, I would give to all eternity, for the sharing of love was meant to last for all time, never to see an end for it is the most precious gift one can give another. All seek love, but few hold on to it, and what is the saddest thing of all, is that the love they pass by today will haunt them tomorrow. The more blind you become to the sight, reality and understanding of love the more willing you are to toss it away as refuse. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cerenity, A serious and sensuous poem to read. wonderful reading. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Cerenity.... This one touched my heart, as it is so beautifully written. I'm at a loss for words, this was wonderful! Your words become music to my soul...... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi, Sy and Sunny. Thank you so much for your kind replys. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful cerenity truely beautiful.  "I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleCerenity~ I believe that the secret to love is giving away more than you keep. If we give until it feels good ... then it always does. These are just beautiful thoughts that you've shared with us. What a tender heart you hold within you. *HUGS* from mine to yours. Love ya' ... ~*Marge*~< !signature--> ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, Nice writing here. There is much truth in your words my friend. Sadly most do not realize what they had until it is too late and they threw it away. I like this one a lot. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Very nice, Cerenity. You could have been speaking to Kahil Gibran...... |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for your kind words, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is full of truth, Cerenity! Lovely thoughts! Denise |
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