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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-07-15 12:43 PM



When Next We Meet

That first moment when we crossed paths
you suspended me in time.
I shared my smile, my nervous talk.
You shared your gaze, held to me.
I left knowing little more than before...
yet more comfortable than when I came.
Though short in time,
your touching my cheek before leaving,
left a warmth of memory to sustain me
unknowingly 'til next...

When a warm fall day, with a hint of rain in the air
brought us together, once more.
Hours were filled with anticipation,
explanations, indications
to play on my mind, in days to come.
And again, you left your mark,
when your fingers graced
my right cheek before parting...
I came back to "Hazel Eyes" and emptiness,
still unaware of the impact
you would soon have on me.


Maureen/Moonchild
7*2k
Pt 2 of Strangers Series






© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-07-15 12:58 PM


MMoonchild........

     "...you suspended me in time..."

     That is beautiful...it's such vivid
     wording!

             Great writing here!


Your words become music to my soul......



Cuddlez
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since 1999-11-27
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Walla Walla, WA 99362
2 posted 2000-07-15 04:10 PM


Eagerly anticipating more of this great writing. Fabulous"-)....


Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

MMoonchild
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3 posted 2000-07-18 01:16 AM


Sunny1...again I must thank you for taking the time to read my words


Cuddlez...
the series will continue(as it does in real)
thank you both for keeping an eye on me
~~soft smiles
Maureen


Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
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4 posted 2000-07-18 01:43 AM


That was beautiful! You have a way with words.

Sauni

Sauni :)

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