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Open Poetry #8

Stars sparkle Moon shines...

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

0 posted 2000-07-15 10:54 AM

Stars sparkle
Moon
  Shines
I'd like to sit and
Watch the
  Sunrise

Cool is the wind
Alone with
  My heart
Dust on my
Shoes
Brush off my
Coat

Walkin' blues ain't bad
Goin' to
  Show the
   Way
Listen to
My feet
Sing a
Happy
  Song

The road is long
Time is a
  Passin'
Goin' to
Meet the
  Sun
Feel it's
  Warmth

Up another hill
Down into
  Another
   World
See it
All
Put another
Hole in my
  Shoes

Ramble on
Find a good
Woman
Live and die
Drink my
Fill

Well
I gotta
  Go
Whistle a
Tune
Write
Another
  Scene

Gotta find my
Shoes
Warm coat
Move along
Look for
Luck

There's the sun now
Big and
  Orange
Pack away my
Books
Time for
Something
  Real

Martini
Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 308
Toronto, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-07-15 10:59 AM

I have read a couple of your peices so far and I absolutely adored this one
Amazing...
________________
Ramble on
Find a good
Woman
Live and die
Drink my
Fill

_________________

That was my favorite part, abolutely wonderful....

Great writing

"In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On"
~Robert Frost

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

2 posted 2000-07-15 11:02 AM

~Martini~
Thank you so much. I must be honest I don't remember reading any of your work yet but you bet I will start looking for it.
thanks again,
IsGona

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2000-07-15 03:26 PM

IsGona~
What a nifty little piece of work.

'Well
I gotta
  Go
Whistle a
Tune
Write
Another
  Scene'

I like it !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-07-15 06:49 PM

IsGona.....

     I like this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     Made me feel footloose and fancy-free!!

         It's got my vote for sure!!

Your words become music to my soul......

Ron

Administrator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-05-19

Posts 8669
Michigan, US

5 posted 2000-07-15 11:17 PM

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