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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
RAINS FLOWING QUIET NOW ... Dinner's end brings quiet's birth A time for reading -- A time for sharing To July's surprise Comes the shower of my waiting To the porch to enjoy the storm To the swing to rest my form Humid's cloud has risen The time to feel relax's somber call Raindrops Interrupt rhododendron's sleep Its leaves flapping Like so many birds of a feather Glistening flag With hummingbirds upon sewn Summer's banner Flies on wings of wind's breath But suddenly stilled By its watered weight As the wind curses it in vain Now the tapering gust Whistles through columns in a row Rivers of rain Flowing down streets of home All's quiet now Save for piano's soft song The back drop of my storm To be heard by all M.A. Miller 07.15.00 < !signature--> My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A.M. [This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 07-15-2000).] |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Summer's banner Flies on wings of wind's breath But suddenly stilled By its watered weight As the wind curses it in vain ______________ Loved those lines. What a way to describe a storm. Beautiful. ______________ All's quiet now Save for piano's soft song The back drop of my storm ______________ I loved this poem. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. .*.*.*.Kay.*.*.*. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Thanks a bunch for reading ... I know it's late and not many folks arouund ... thanks again ... do you have time to read "pleas(e.e)" thanks in advance ... do have other pieces posted now? |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
M.Miller~ The gentle rains are enjoyed through your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi MA, This bit of a storm was the best one I have ever encountered, by the way I am so pleased to have you here with us and I hope you are enjoying yourself we are one big loving family around here, WELCOME. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful MA! Ahhh, I so enjoy watching a storm roll in from the front porch ... what a beautiful site to behold nature in such glory. Thank you for this lovely picture ... very well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
MA...what a picture you have painted...I can feel it along my spine |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thank you all for those many kind comments ... i'm a sucker for a good summer storm ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Me too MA!! There's nothing like hearing the crash of the thunder and the brightness of the lightning. . . singing in nature's symphony. . . You have described it well here. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Captured the storm on this one! Mmmm... can you smell the ozone? I'm sitting under a good one right now. And me without a porch... I enjoy your poetry and your different styles. This one was great. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Many thanks again to all ... I wouldn't know how to act without a porch ... Thanks for noticing style breaks, Trew ... |
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