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Open Poetry #8

My Shining Star

LiLOnE
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma

0 posted 2000-07-14 07:35 PM

My Shining Star

You're my best friend,
My shining star.
I'd be lost without you,
And couldn't go very far.
~*~
You're there when I need you,
Through thick and thin,
Our bond is so strong,
No secrets within.
~*~
Two of a kind,
Yet so much like one.
So many pictures,
Of us having fun.
~*~
You're my shining star,
That gives me the light,
To lead me in the right direction,
When day turns to night.
~*~
Best Friends forever,
We'll always be
Inseparable from eachother
It's just you and me.
~*~

[This message has been edited by LiLOnE (edited 07-14-2000).]

RainbowGirl
Member Elite

since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-07-14 07:47 PM

That is how it should be..

HUGS

LiLOnE
Junior Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 41
Sudbury, Ma

2 posted 2000-07-14 07:51 PM

HEHEHE AWWW yeah it is... my dad used to always tell me you can count your TRUE
friends on one hand...well I figure if i can count just one!! I am all set

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

3 posted 2000-07-14 11:34 PM

very well done LiLOnE,
good friends are a most important part of our lives and your friends are very lucky
Rich

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-07-15 06:42 AM

LiLOnE~
This is a nice look at friendship.
Welcome to Passion's ...
you will find many friends here.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2000-07-21 10:52 PM

hehe.. I was always told - "You'll have three best friends if you're really lucky in this life - your parents - and hopefully one more"... Nice one, LiLOnE

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

6 posted 2000-07-21 11:04 PM

This is a great way to look at friendship. Well done!

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