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Deep in the Realm of Maybe
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Deep in the Realm of Maybe |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon 
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the inflection of your words lays heavy upon my mind oh, you'd not have to speak a word for me to know you and in a room of a thousand yous or in a hall of words laid bare to the world you could hide amongst them and still my heart would seek you and find you as sure as any bloodhound as swift as any hawk oh yes I'd know you you are an arial view into my soul your tones, your phrases even the twist of a joke runs it's course straight through to my heart and leaves me yearning and aching for things better left unthought upon the firmities of this earth yet instead the realms of my mind untapped as to it's power hold me a willing captive to your remembered smile and my exit in a final closing x as soft blue light closes around me plunging me into a dark velvet night leaves me l o n g i n g for a bittersweet kiss that only you can give and I lay wakeful and wanting deep in the realm of maybe [This message has been edited by X Angel (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"deep in the realm of maybe" ... no maybe's about it XAngel ... I enjoyed this very much! Nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
X Angel, I'm with Kit here!!! Beautiful poem!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Easy flowing style to this piece ... enjoyed reading and again ... fav lines ... and in a room of a thousand yous or in a hall of words laid bare to the world you could hide amongst them and still my heart would seek you and find you thanks for sharing |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I agree with MA Miller that those are my fav lines also, X-Angel..powerful and deep words, I truly enjoyed it!  *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
XAngel~ This is such a lovely piece of nostalgic longing ... 'you are an arial view into my soul' Ahhhhh ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Thank you so much guys for your replies  ~Heather |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What a beautiful beautiful poem Heather! You show a love shared by true soulmates and show it wonderfully  Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful poem very well written. "Deep in the realm of maybe." I like that very much. I found the "yearning and aching for the things better left unthought upon the firmities of this earth." quite interesting to say the least. Excellent poetry!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
lovely indeed and certainly no doubt or Maybes about the quality of this one... good to read, enjoyed muchly regards, sudhir. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Oh what a wonderful piece...very full of maybe!! Very nice...liked it!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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