Open Poetry #8 |
I Miss You |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
I Miss You < !signature-->Amy M. Kennedy i miss you so much i could scream why did you have to go away the day you left you took my dream of having a mom for the rest of my days it's time like this that i need you the pain, it cuts both ways i've never since had someone in my life so true dark surrounds me, no light, not even a ray i try to be strong, and carry on but some scars never leave you were my life, and now you're gone been six years now, hard to believe its still so unreal to me even after all these years helps to know your in heaven but even so here come the tears one by one they fall down my face and the memories come flooding back like a tidal wave ironic that your memory much as it hurts is my saving grace i hope you are happy, i know you are free i miss you and that is the simple fact we'll be together again, that i believe but now today, i want you back. i miss you mom! note to reader...sorry for the sadness of this. "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 06-13-2000).] |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Please don't be sorry. Never be sorry for your poetry. It's from your heart and it's all we've got sometimes. This is so heartfelt...truly. I wish I had more original words to put down here...but what I'm trying to say is that this poem was well expressed and so full of meaning,...it touched my heart. Please take care. *Peace. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Amy, I'm so sorry for your loss. It's so difficult to put these emotions to paper, and yet so often they are a release, for it gives us a moment's grace to reflect on all the wonderful memories that we have while penning them. You've expressed yourself beautifully in this verse. Best wishes and HUGS to you Amy, /Kit |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you spitfire and kit...your comments made me smile. i really needed them on today. you guys are very sweet. love ya, amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
I am so sorry...my Mom and I are very close.. I don't want to think about how I am going to feel when I too will be going through this......hopefully not too soon though...my heart and love go out to you....in time you can heal.... Julie |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Amy, I just wanted to say I wish you all the best in this life. I still have my mom, but lost my best friend 8 years ago so I kinda know what you are going through. This poem brought back the memories and the tears Great heartfelt writing by the way All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
one by one they fall down my face and the memories come flooding back like a tidal wave ironic that your memory much as it hurts is my saving grace i hope you are happy, i know you are free i miss you and that is the simple fact we'll be together again, that i believe but now today, i want you back. i miss you mom! .... so sad Amy, but very well written. I wish I could help share this sadness... Warm Regards and take care, Sudhir. |
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MysticalNights Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 112Oklahoma |
Touching.. Very touching... No need to be sorry. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~normally i don't reply this much to my own work...but i REALLy wanted to tell you all how much I have appreciated your sweet replies, encouragement, and understanding. I am having a difficult time right now as it was around this time six years ago that my Mom passed away due to a heart attack. She was more than my Mom...she was my best friend too! I miss her terribly, and the only way I know how to work through that was to write. So thank you for responding and for reading! You guys truly are angels put on Earth! Love ya, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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