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Dance with the Moon
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Dance with the Moon |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia 
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Distant is the light that shimmers at night a mournful journey i embark Silently searching for the secrets that are lurking deep in the womb of the dark My heart lays hiding in the moonbeams shining I make a wish to her above That with her glory and grace, her silver embrace I again can learn to love And many a year i wait patiently here to discover the melody of life Music of dew drops forming before sleepy morning awakes with a symphony of light Seduced by the breeze, my sorrow released the stars soft spoken in tune I'll reach towards the sky,let my spirit take flight One last infinite dance with the moon. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My heart lays hiding in the moonbeams shining I make a wish to her above That with her glory and grace, her silver embrace I again can learn to love ------------ Music of dew drops forming before sleepy morning awakes with a symphony of light ---------------- Seduced by the breeze, my sorrow released the stars soft spoken in tune I'll reach towards the sky,let my spirit take flight One last infinite dance with the moon ----------------- this is beautiful lovely imagery and well expressed emotions well written work, enjoyed the read take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful imagery and graceful in the write. This is really beautiful.  |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
love the internal line rhymes ... great work ... fav lines ... Silently searching for the secrets that are lurking and ... Seduced by the breeze, my sorrow released |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Everything they said with a me too please... I have a thing for moon dancing too...I vote! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
So beautiful....I too have an obsession with the moon. Thank you for the wonderful read! *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Thanks to everyone for taking the time to read and respond to my poem...im glad you enjoyed something so close to my heart...Thanks again! |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~What can I say but "ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT"..I am so proud of you 99...See, all it took was sitting down and letting the true emotions come from within and now that you have done it i hope to see more of your work posted...keep it up~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Wonderful, I voted. I loved your poems before, but due to my obsessive moon complex (should we hold a meeting?theres so many!) I'll be keeping track from now on. ^_~ Looking forward to more posts from you. .*.*.*.Kay.*.*.*. "I'm sorry for telling u love was unnecessary... making u lose ur way. I'm sure I'll be as sad as u feel." ~Touch and Go |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
And many a year i wait patiently here to discover the melody of life Music of dew drops forming before sleepy morning awakes with a symphony of light I loved these thoughts princess...(your name is very cute as I am reminded often of how I pout being a moody moonchild...) I happen to be enjoying my first days here and find so much in common with other's writings..I too, wrote a poem called She Danced with the Moon...describing myself...my website is called Once in a Blue Moon and is filled with friends' moon poems on the first two pages...thank you for the enjoyment of reading yours ~~softly Maureen |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I just forgot to cast my vote...sorry 99~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoutPrincess~ I adore poems with any hint of the moon. Well done imagery in your render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poutprincess Senior Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 735Perth, Western Australia, Australia |
Beth--you are always a fantastic friend guiding me along the way...thank you for encouraging me to write again. AniKay83--i adore your poetry and i thank you so much for spending the time to read and respond to mine. MMoonchild--thank you your lovely response...and i would love to have the web address for your webpage..it would be wonderful to read other tributes to the moon. Marge--as new member i look up to you and your poetry (as well as many others!)and im very pleased you took the time to read and enjoy my poem. thank you **everyone here is an inspiration and it a joy to share my loves and losses with so many talented people** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
See you little cutie patootie ... I really DO remember you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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