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All My Life
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All My Life |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I never met someone like you In my life before you came to me, There was nothing, Now I've found you, All my life , I've been waiting for you, Now I've found love, The kind of love, I always wanted , My dreams came true, Here,being close to you, I never thought, you will come to me, And you'll give me the kind love I always dreamnt of, All my life, I've been waiting for you, Now,you're here, Holding my hand, Never felt like this before, You give me love as the night grew colder, You hold me tight, All my life, only for you, I live for you, you give me love, As time goes by, All my life, I've been waiting for you, All my life, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Wow this smells of love, this speaks of love, this points to love... so lovely, utterly romantic... nice work, vandana... regards, sudhir |
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LiLOnE Junior Member
since 2000-07-12
Posts 41Sudbury, Ma |
Vandana, I love you poem! It acctually describes how I feel right now perfectly! I hope to see more of your poems.. Keep it up!! ~*~LiLOnE~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandanna you don't know how much I wish I could find a woman as devoted as you that would speak those lovely words to me....James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This man would kill to have a love such as this. This is so romantic. Wonderful pen your heart carries. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Very pretty... Hopes he feels the same way.. If only every one could find a love like yours.. Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hi VanDana~ Glad to see your smiling heart in here. Hope all is well in big ole' Atlanta ! Nice to read your romantic little self !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Superb vandana. . . you wear your heart on your sleeve. . . and it shows wonderfully in this one. . . Excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I think this is my favorite of yours Vandana, very lovely! Denise |
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