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Open Poetry #8

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Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

0 posted 2000-07-14 06:45 AM

If I kissed you softly
What would you say,
Would you hold my hand
And ask to stay.

Would you hold me through
the night,
Kiss me,
And tell me everythings
alright.

Would you whisper in my
ear,
That you love me so,
Stay by my side,
Rock me to and fro.

Would you play with
my hair,
Look at me,
Not take away your
stare.

Would we make love through
the night,
Sweet kisses,
Holding each other tight.

Hold on, we've done this before,
Maybe in my head,
I want this more.

poutprincess
Senior Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 735
Perth, Western Australia, Australia

1 posted 2000-07-14 06:55 AM

ah...Beth...loved it...loved it..especially when you said "maybe in my head"...how beautiful daydreams can be..and how lovingly these words describe it...(Blessed Be Ree)

Beth
Member

since 2000-07-06

Posts 468
WA, Australia

2 posted 2000-07-14 08:34 AM

~Ah, thanks 99...Its good to know you enjoy reading my poetry...I still havent seen your work posted girl! Your replies are always helpfull to make this easier...Thanks~

Blessed Be,
Beth

ShOrTy
New Member

since 2000-07-12

Posts 6
falMOUTH.MA

3 posted 2000-07-14 09:28 AM

That was so pretty. I nearly cried. That was so sweet and meaningful. oh my ... I cant even think of words to say how I feel about that poem. The work was just amazing.
ShOrTy

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