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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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In quiet night I silently dreamed That I could see for miles around Amidst a garden Full of clouds I could barely see the ground Above the mountains But below the sky I await the silent dawn I sit and stare And begin to smile As then I start to yawn Sleepily I lay Upon a could That's floating up in the sky I twist and turn At my fading vision My dream begins to die Again I awake Amongst the clouds To the sounds of noisy grunts To my alarm I'm standing on The shoulders of giants Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
trevor, I believe this is the first I am reading from you... so let me say  WELCOME TO PASSIONS Next allow me to say that this was a very enjoyable read for me... and I am now loking to read atleast a few more form you right away... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Trevor, I believe this is the first I am reading from you... so let me say WELCOME TO PASSIONS Next allow me to say that this was a very enjoyable read for me... and I am now looking to read atleast a few more from you right away... regards, sudhir< !signature--> Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne P.S. darn network.... submitted twice... anyway have a nice time here... [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 07-14-2000).] |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
Thanks a lot for the feedback. I really appreciate it. Keep it coming. Trevor Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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