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Left At The Church
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Left At The Church |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Left At The Church ~*Marge Tindal*~ It started as a small squall. It left me in it's lurch. The storm within you brewing, left me standing at the church. My tear-stained face, the satin and the lace. My heart sighing, even the flowers were dying. Instead of Here Comes The Bride, they played Where Is The Groom? The day my world stopped and shadows cast a gloom. The preacher gone home. The crowd and the ushers too. I sat alone on the steps still waiting for you. Out of the shadows you stepped. My heart took a leap. The guilt on your face when you said, 'Sorry, babe, I got cold feet.' Suddenly it was funny. We found that we could cope with any kind of disaster. Now let's find the preacher and ELOPE ! *For TennesseeAngel~* |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Priceless, Marge, Priceless!! I love it. It's always nice to have a happy ending!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge---I think you could take an earthquake and turn it into a good thing...Just love it, and you! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Marge- you truely are too sweet. I am sure that Tennessee Angel is gonna love you for this. My praise to your kind heart and your wonderous pen.  (and being that she has already seen it before I could post I know I was right.) [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-13-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ I'm so glad you got to respond first ! Yeah .... I kind of like those 'happy endings' ! Love ya', my poet friend ! Martie~ Hmmmmmm ! Earthquake, huh ? Must be a California gal talking ! Nah ... think I'll pass on that one. For now ! MarkB~ Yeah ... that Tennessee gal is fast ! Tee-Hee ! Thanks for the reply ! Do we have FUN here - or what ???? ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Just wanted to come back and say that we make a pretty awesome poetic team! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh, Marge this one is soooo cute in ryhme You have me giggling with a huge smile  Coco |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great surprise ending, Marge! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Yeah ! We do ! CocoBaci~ Thanks, glad to get a giggle ! Denise~ So glad it caught you in surprise ! Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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