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I Love You
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I Love You |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I Love You Hey baby... you drive me crazy. I Love kissing your lips. I Love touching your fingertips. I Love you more than you are aware. I Love you more than you let me share. I Love you even thou I'm not sure if you Love me. But I'll be your friend and over time we'll see. Only God knows the way the wind will blow. Will it blow you into my life or carry you away from me? Hey baby... I really do Love you. Hope you Love me too. Dear God... please let this Love be true. Jameslee@July12,2000 |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi James...... The title caught my eye, and I really am very glad it did!!!!! I hope the wind blows your love into your life........ Life is but a dream... so sleep easy... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
keep kissing that wind SBJ... this poem reads like a song.. sing it to her james... make her swoon  later-kissing-gator jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sunny and Janet...I hope and pray that Lena will keep coming my way...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee 12345, You're in love, it shows in this poem. Great, because love is great. I enjoyed reading this very much. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is very very sweet! I hope things work out for you two!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Great poem James!!!!! I like this happy side of you!!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes Bill I am in love but I'm not sure about her feelings. Sea that makes two of us...thank you. Marina I like the happy side of me also...I have been happy lately...and I want more happiness...James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~James~ A great poem, very sweet. I wish you the best with Lena, hey, you never know she could be "the one." Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Impassionata Junior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 26Alberta,Canada |
hey jmlee, The very well known words of your poems title caught my eye and when I read your poem it spoke to me deep in my soul. Thank you for sharing this wonderful work! I know everything will work out for you, because you understand what true love is. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful and spoken from the heart. I hope things work for you and if you haven't yet; let her know. This poem would be a good place to start. Good luck my friend. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Melissa I hope with all my heart that she is the one...I am giving her plenty of time to figure that out on her side...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, WOW!!! This was beautiful and tender writing from your heart. You keep this up and how will she ba able to refuse?? I wish you nothing but the best my friend. May your dreams come true. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice poem. Good luck my friend Rich |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Impassionata, Mark, Lone Wolf, and spiked for your thoughtful responses...James |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Hi James, This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem....please tell her.....that might be exactly what she is waiting for...even if she would never let on..... Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Julie for your wonderful comment...believe me she knows...and if she doesn't it will sink in some day...and if she cares...mutual love can go a long way...James |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Your poem is so beautiful, and I hope she returns your wonderful feelings to delight you beyond heavens stars. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
like a feather in a windstorm ... so close ... yet just when you think it will float right into your hand ... it lifts back up above your reach good luck James |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Precious that thing called "Love"!! Very sweet piece!! Good luck to you!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Lost Dreamer, Rex, and Justblue. Yes I have to agree Love is very precious...James |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Tender and Soft.....what woman could resist this! You wrote with so much love...and it shows in each line~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
jmlee12345, You write from a love that is there. I truly hope that you end up together with her. Writing as you do, how can you not? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Butterflies and Bill....I appreciate your warm responses...James |
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