Open Poetry #8 |
Love Bug . |
angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Love Bug . Ladybirds with wings encased, A solid outer shell, Yet deep inside, Emotions strong often stay and swell, A ladybird, A caring beast, With feeling clear and true, If only it could open up, It would not be so blue . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I'm proud to have such a beautiful and true poem bear my name! Great poem, my friend. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thanks, I think it's a cool name and it is good when used in a metaphorical sence aswell . I'am glad you thought it was worthy of bearing the same name . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~This is a wonderful, wonderful poem. I love it...really,...I am not just saying that to sound kind...I love it. It holds both beauty and truth. Take care. *Peace. |
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Enola Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 138England |
I've copied this, so you can write it in my book now, it's a cool poem. The tragedy of it is that nobody sees the look of desperation on my face. Thousands and thousands of us, and we're passing one another without a look of recognition. |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
"If only it could open up, it would not be so blue"...that was my favorite line, very true of a ladybug and of anyone...good work Angelswing! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Thankyou all, It is a funky little poem, that I am very proud of, I am glad you enjoyed it as much as I enjoyed writeing it . L.of.L. Tom . |
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