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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2000-07-12 11:35 AM


Before anything happens,
Let me tell you,
I'm not in love with you,
I'm in love with somelse,

So I don't want to fall in love with you,
So that's why ,
I want you to know first,

Before I fall for you
Or you fall in love with me,
Because I know,
you're in love with me,

And I don't love you,
I love someone,
who makes me smile
every day and every night,

I love him so much,
He takes my hand
and he says he loves me very much,

So let me tell you that
I don't care about you,
And I love him so,

Sorry,
If I hurt your heart,
I know,
It takes for
To heal the pain

You've inside,
Before I fall for you,
I wanted to tell you
That I don't love you anymore
and I love him so much,

Sorry ,
If I hurt you,
so that's why,
I want to know,

Before you fall for me,
and before I fall for you,
Nothing should happen
between us,

before we fall for eachother,
Before I fall for you,

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-07-12 12:49 PM


Nice read.  Was that a twist I saw in there?  Makes one ponder for awhile. enjoyed it much.
Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2000-07-13 12:06 PM


vandana. . . you always manage to get yourself into these situations don't you?

they seem to find their way into your writing. . . and what a twist. . .

excellent. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-07-13 05:31 AM


Wonderful writings Vandana  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-07-13 06:10 AM


Vandana you really have a cool and unique style...so it looks like you found someone new or perhaps they have found you...wishing you the wonderful blessings of a friendship and perhaps more...James
Cuddlez
Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422
Walla Walla, WA 99362
5 posted 2000-07-15 04:21 PM


This poem is once again imprinted with your unique writing style..
Before I stay riveted to the computer longer...

Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go.

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