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If I were dead
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If I were dead |
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slipknot Junior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 25 |
I know lots of people girls and guys I get some attention but at all the wrong times not when I need it not when I'm in pain I wonder, am I sane I feel so alone more often than not why is it so hard to find somebody to call my own if I were to die right now would anyone miss me? the funeral would come and people would show wow, look there all here to see me everybody would come and cry their eyes out I'm all that's on their minds true love, I finally feel some the best day of my life to bad I'll be dead but I hope I'll be able to watch for a few hours one day words about me is all everyone will say the best time of life after all these years is felt at my funeral with a couple of tears that isn't right it's not how it should be I want people to cry about me but because I'm alive because I touch there lives but you don't realize what you passed up until he's dead why am I waiting any longer go get those tears make up for all the years friends till the end I've heard well, now's the end |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Oh, I have felt that way many times and sometimes theres just no seeing the positive.But in the end you know what is right and what you what to happen..I knew i had to survive because who could I proove wrong if I didnt...I loved the detail you put into this poem and hope you write more~ Blessed Be, Beth |
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douglasbailey Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27Palmerston North, New Zealand |
This is great, well it's great that you wrote it but not that some many of us go through it. We have to hold on for a better day. God bless RAAAAAAA! Douglas |
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