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The Number One Hit
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The Number One Hit |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
A Song is composed..... For You and Me.... The First verse is sung in our Hearts...... A Melody of Hopes and Dreams..... The second verse is played every day on the beats of our hearts The Chorus is easy if you think it through..... I love you...... and then go back to the first verse with you..... |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
what a familiar song...=) well done. abstract, to the point, and hopefully true. i envy these feelings you have. keep up the good stuff. i dig it. |
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tickle tickle New Member
since 2000-04-03
Posts 7 |
a song to sing with the one you love, a song to sing about the one you love mmmmmmmm... well done eyes |
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*passion-fruit* Junior Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 12 |
I love this poem. It's so simple but very very sweet. Sometimes smaller poems pack a much bigger punch and in this case it sure did. Great work and good luck on future poems. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful!  |
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