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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-07-11 08:30 PM


           My angel of love

When angels charge in down and deep
And touch your heart when your asleep.
They blanket you with angel dust
And whisk you into wanderlust.

Sprinkle you with emerald light
Tickle you with sheer delight
Harp your soul with song and sign
Wrap your heart in spirits wine.

Turn the glove to turtledove
Change it into ladylove.
Make an arbor walled with stars
Turn your bed to alcazar.

Fill you head with fantasy.
Turn your mind to ecstasy
Nothing is beyond their do
If that angel is for you.

And I have found just such a one
And oh my god, it has begun.


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Martie
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1 posted 2000-07-11 08:39 PM


Wow, Sy...somebody better hold you down before you fly away...wonderful poem!
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-07-11 09:12 PM


They blanket you with angel dust
And whisk you into wanderlust.

Sprinkle you with emerald light
Tickle you with sheer delight
Harp your soul with song and sign
Wrap your heart in spirits wine.
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Fill you head with fantasy.
Turn your mind to ecstasy
Nothing is beyond their do
If that angel is for you.

And I have found just such a one
And oh my god, it has begun.
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me thinks there are angels in love
in here tonight ...
seems to be catching  
this is perfect Sy-guy
(ohhowilovewhenyouwritelikethis)
later-halo-gator
jm


Denise
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3 posted 2000-07-11 09:35 PM


Very beautiful, Sy!  

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
4 posted 2000-07-12 03:30 AM


This is a beautiful poem, but it sounds like one of those wet woolen blanket dreams again.
But it is very beautiful
Liz

ESP
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since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2000-07-12 04:13 AM


Come back down to us, Seymour!
Sounds like you have flown into the clouds of ecstasy!
Lovely poem.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2000-07-12 07:52 AM


Oh Sy this is a fabulous read...what a fantasy...WOW  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2000-07-12 08:15 AM


Martie,
It's fun to fly. *L*

Janet,
Just aim to please. *L*

Denise,
Thanks and *L*

Elizabeth,
Well what did you expect? Love Sy

ESP,
I don't want to come down.

Tracie,
Thanks for the big WOW. *L*

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