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Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

0 posted 2000-07-11 06:04 PM

A voice though heard
rings undefined

to fall a
phrase or
perhaps a word
touched, lightly
here

A smile it brings
a pain, a laugh
to sing in nights
of lonely dream
music

to ears of past refrain

heeded not
nay – sight un(seen)
an aching hope it cries
in pliant need
to carry peals of flow
in form to whole

to cry, to know

Afloat ‘pon currents
might and meek
voice of
one dimensional
fathoms deep

to crash the cliffs
of empty faces

alone
awaiting
understanding

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

1 posted 2000-07-11 06:15 PM

Unique style ... More please ...

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

2 posted 2000-07-11 06:22 PM

Satiate this is very beautiful even though the words seem steeped in sadness. a wonderful poem.

"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else" faster-Manic street preachers.

Nicole
Senior Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 1835
Florida

3 posted 2000-07-13 01:53 AM

Thank you both, very much!

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

4 posted 2000-07-13 01:59 AM

Beautifully spoken.
I love it.

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-07-13 02:31 AM

to fall a
phrase or
perhaps a word
touched, lightly
here

A smile it brings
a pain, a laugh
to sing in nights
of lonely dream
music

to ears of past refrain

I really loved this and the style was perfect and awesome.

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

6 posted 2000-07-13 05:01 AM

Oh WoW
beautiful poetry my friend

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

7 posted 2000-07-13 06:23 AM

I'm not sure anyone ever truly "understands" - nor am I sure understanding would be all it is cracked up to be. All I can say is I can truly identify with the emotion behind this one, Nicole. "To crash the cliffs of empty faces" -- sigh!!!

Wonderfully done...

Michael

Christopher

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

8 posted 2000-07-17 02:53 AM

Well now ms. Nic... I'm thinkin' back to a time when you told me that you couldn't write free verse. Yep, got agree with you, you can't write it. But you breathe it damn well!

C.

PS: BOL!!!

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