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Sunrise on Maple Creek
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Sunrise on Maple Creek |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Sunrise on Maple Creek A candle has been lit in the horizon and now Maple Creek is on fire in its darkling waters darting eyes circle the rock looking for jewels as cascading sparks hit the dust of sleep and bedeck the air to scarlet The sky that was in silence waiting opens with sound across the trees and in the marsh grass one eye closed the frog is silent watching Inside the room her eyes dream drenched she sees the creeping of light beneath the door that slowly steels across the room to touch the crystal in the window with a rainbow of emergence and she stalls her shivering within the waiting arms of wool to tip toe across the porch and heave the weight of sleep into the fragrant air Barefoot into the damp she goes clutching the collector for to make a memory so sweet click within the camera’s eye is all that’s needed. A candle has been lit in the horizon and now Maple Creek is on fire. |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Poetry is truly alive ... Thanks. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I love the way you paint the picture!!!! I can almost feel myself walking across the porch to watch the sunrise.... Beautiful work here!! Hold life with an open hand....leaving it room to grow.... |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, Truly held in the moment . Doc |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Superb, Martie... thank you for sharing this picture with us! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My precious and talented friend~ You captured a KODAK Moment ... and didn't even put film in the camera ! I'll take two prints !  Awesome lady ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful sunrise, Martie! I could see it all! Denise |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
MA Miller--Thank you for such a lovely compliment. Sunny--I'm glad you liked the picture...I wrote it because of a picture that a friend sent me of a sunrise in North Carolina. Doc--Each moment should be held. suthern--hi gal, haven't seen you for awhile...glad this poem pleased you. Marge--You got my two prints...thanks for the awesome. Denise--thanks, my friend for your eyes that see so much. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Corinne |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A very lovely picture you have painted. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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AndrewDL Junior Member
since 2000-07-02
Posts 24California |
Great job, Martie. I truely admire how you are able to paint such beautiful pictures with a handful of words. I really like it that you stray away from using rhyme in most of your work- especially in this one. Great work! -Andrew Trust too much, and you may be deceived, but trust too little and you will live in torment forever. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corinne and Prometheus...thank you for such a lovely word as lovely. Andrew...I'm so glad you liked this poem...thanks for the read. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Martie wonderful descriptions and imagery...James |
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