Open Poetry #8 |
Love |
Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
LOVE joy happiness sorrow sex hurt pain guilt longing caressing hug kiss touch feel smile laugh cry yearn forgive forget move on lust like forever never marriage children divorce death LOVE |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
One word.......one million feelings. Great work~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
ahhh- the many faces of love. Amazing how just one word has so much power over us all. Nice one here. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you both for you kind replys |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
many faces, many visions, many sensations, many emotions, well done Martini... and WELCOME TO PASSIONS.. and enjoy your stay here regards, sudhir |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
sudhir thanks so much for the welcome!!! And the kind words I am enjoying my stay thus far!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
right at the top of the page, what do I see waiting for me? A triple Martini! Loved the cycle of emotion here...and welcome to the forum! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Yes, one little four letter word does say ever so much, nicely done |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
serenity... a triple martini huh!! I'm glad you enjoyed!!! Jeff: does it ever!! thanks for reading "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well, I have to say you have all the emotions involved covered quite well. Great way to bring them out. I enjoyed very much. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
thanks.... I just wrote every emotion i was feeling one day down.... i'm glad you read it "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Martini, Excellent range of emotions you display here. Your words paint a beautiful picture. Nice writing!! Welcome to Passions!! Looking forward to more!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Martini, I like this very much. the last line really did it for me, after death is love...... oh, and this group.. caressing hug kiss touch feel smile Parker I sorta thought Parker fit in there nicely. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ooo parker took my smiling yuh liked this i did |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
Parker... that was my favorite grouping too!!! Nice addition! hahahhaha thanks for reading Wayoutwalt.... i'm glad you enjoyed "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" ~Robert Frost |
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