Hallelujah ! ! ! ( haiku )

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Open Poetry #8

Hallelujah ! ! ! ( haiku )

bad little dog
Junior Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 38
city pound

0 posted 2000-07-11 06:48 AM

Hallelujah!!!
~~~
F two fifty Ford
Monster kit with engine floored
Barking from the back
~

Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

1 posted 2000-07-11 07:08 AM

Fun and funky,
Short and sweet,
This little poem,
I wish I could eat .

I loved the poem, It was short and fun but still had the use of at least one metaphor, very clever .
Loved the animation .
L.of.L. Tom .

Don't try, do or do not, there is no try .
- Master Yoda -

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2000-07-12 08:47 AM

Have to agree fun little Haiku

Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 2000-07-12 09:56 AM

HEY! Don't ya know, I'd rather push a Chevy that drive a Ford?

j/k

This was a fun poem...I remember those days...the petal to the metal ones

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

4 posted 2000-07-12 10:41 AM

I must say I have ot agree with WhtDove on the Chevy part. This haiku was great and one day I will try one but they are still out of my reach.

bad little dog
Junior Member

since 2000-07-08

Posts 38
city pound

5 posted 2000-07-13 11:00 PM

Thankyou everyone
I'm glad to hear that you Chevy Lovers
don't mind pushing ... it's good exercise
I heard
... ruff ...

Ruff Bow Wow
Grrrrrrrrrrr

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