Open Poetry #8 |
Before we stopped talking |
jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
the racks are full of clothes that will make me feel better about what you did I talk with friends about trivial things that don't matter anymore they don't know about this yet I just don't talk about it in a few hours I will come to your work and tell you that I can't let myself love you anymore I don't recognize my reflection in the mirror outside the dressing room bitter mouth big sore eyes I ended up buying a big black winter coat for eighty dollars you tell me you like it I'll hide from you underneath it and cry in your truck until one a.m. do you know what you do to me? |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Such a vivid, painful description of your emotions...I like the phrase about hiding from him underneath your coat. Good work. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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jennie may* Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 122 |
thanks! "We have all these galaxies inside of us. And if we don't enter those in art, then I don't understand the point in doing anything."-Sam Shepard |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Jennie* I understand the shopping route all to well trying to fill the void.....never works out that way though. Good work~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This is really good - you've got my vote |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I liked this much, jennie may...great work. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just a whirlwind of emotions going on here, always happens during the hardest part...the separation. Very well done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is very good, Jennie...emphasis very... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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