Open Poetry #8 |
Serenity Is Mine |
Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Atop the Rocky Mountains high An eagle soars into the sky. And as I watch from down below, The raging river waters flow. The brilliant colorful wildflowers, swaying in the breeze. Showing off their beauty, nestled amongst the rocks and trees. The chromatic wings of the butterfly, dancing from bloom to bloom As the scent of the wildflowers, imparts a sweet perfume. As I watch in awe and wonder of this vision tonight. I witness, what must be, the most beautiful sight. The sun as it's setting over the Rockies to the west. The red sky with its pink cotton clouds, truly was the best. This serenity is mine alone. As I seek and find that inner glow. And the enchantment of this exquisite scene Brings a reality on the wings of a dream. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Eloise, Sigh . . . what a breathtaking sunset you have painted over the Rockies!! Feel like I am sitting there beside you. Fabulous imagery and writing!!! LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ Exquisitely breathtaking. What lovely imagery you portrayed in sharing your Rocky Mountain view with us. Made me think of the wonderful music of John Denver as he sang of the beauty of that area. 'Rocky Mountain High' .... oh, such a nostalgic trip you've taken me on. Thank you - thank you - thank you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What wonderful word pictures. "Serenity is mine alone as I seek and find that inner glow." That's so true and so well written, thanks for the beautiful trip! |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Lone Wolf, Marge and ethome, thank you all for your kind words. The sunsets over the Rockies this week have been beautiful, to say the least! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
I think they sell that picture at www.webshots.com... very nice Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thanks Prometheus. I checked out that website and there are some nice webshots there. |
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