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She's Hot (Sven's challenge)
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She's Hot (Sven's challenge) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She's Hot Kiss me if you must. Touch me with just the right amount of lust. If you like to bite I don't care that's alright. Go ahead and touch my face and caress my hair. Tenderly touch me everywhere. You can even be a little rough as long as your heart has some love to share. Give me everything you got. The more the better that's what I want. Cause I can't help but love a woman that knows she's hot. Jameslee@June10,2000 For the Hot women of Passions and the Cool one's too. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Damn James you are regular Phonzy LOL. Man did you ever turn the heat up in here. NOw I know who the passion into poetry, enjoyed this. you the man. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. Faster- manic street preachers I am an architect, they call me a butcher I am a pioneer, they call me primitive I am purity, they call me perverted Holding you but I only miss these things when they leave I am idiot drug hive, the virgin, the tattered and the torn Life is for the cold made warm and they are just lizards Self-disgust is self-obsession honey and I do as I please A morality obedient, only to the cleansed repented *I am stronger than Mensa, Miller and Mailer I spat out Plath and Pinter I am all the things that you regret A truth that washes that learnt how to spell The first time you see yourself naked you cry Soft skin now acne, foul breath, so broken He loves me truly this mute solitude I'm draining I know I believe in othing but it is my nothing Sleep can't hide the thoughts splitting through my mind Shadows aren't clean, false mirrors too many people awake If you stand up like a nail then you will be knocked down I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else * chorus So damn easy to cave in, man kills everything (x4) ----- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Whew! You are the one that is hot, James, dear! Corinne |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It's a little warm in here!!! Tasty little morsel you penned James, Thank you for sharing  |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Hot Damn, James... Kissing, biting, caressing, loving, touching...and sharing! You got it all in there in a short poem...I love every word. Very HOT!!! Great job!!!  MagnoliaBlue Pay a visit to: http://cyberageadventures.com You will love it! "A poem is just an expression of my life and heart."*CJB* ~*My Skipper Jim, I love you! Your Lady June*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Phew! I'm havin' to take too many cold showers around here lately! Well done James!Best wishes, /Kit |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I agree that this poem is very hot Whew!! better call 911 because i'm on fire.. lol |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Wow! Really enjoyed this one! Romance and pure lust rolled into one. Keep 'em comin'!! "That man has shown himself great who has never grieved in evil days and never bewailed his destiny." --Seneca |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
hehehe I see you're tiptoeing close to the edge of Open near Adult here! Any more steam rising from this one, and PdV would probably have to move it there! LOL This sir, is HOT! Very nice piece of steam, er....poetry! |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Your go James......HEHEHE It takes only a minute to get a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOH its so nicey to see sweetbabyjames SPICY looooove this one you matchstick you later-sin-gator lol jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~WooHoo James!!! Hehe...great little piece here. A treat to read...you little devil you.  . *Peace. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whoa!!! James this is hot, very hot. Oh I liked this very much especially the part about biting I like to do that (god I'm giving to much away here)...LOL Oh I think you win..way to go James  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Brian, First_Knight and all you wonderful Hot and Lovely women of Passions. You are the Hottest!!!! Oh I almost forgot..tracie I love the biting part...my heart beats a little faster in those moments...do hickey's count as biting? James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well James I wasn't thinking about hickey's at the time more along the lines of lets say tender "love nips" Oh boy here it goes again my temperature rising...sorry gotta go  TC~< !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-11-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ gotta love this! Good grief it's hot in here!  -SEA[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
this is great!...first time I heard about a challenge for "hot passionate women" but hey...why not? not really great writing |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Very hot, James! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you tracie, Sea, Corazon, and Elizabeth...I'm glad you enjoyed. Actually tracie hickies are just a little diversion..I enjoy lip to lip kissing the best. More than I could say...James |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
So steamy.....it steamed my computer screen...it will be tuff for all those men in here to beat this one!! Great work!!! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
The poem was hot...your girl is hot too. A_L |
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Antonio New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 4Sweden |
I know exactly what your writing about...It is hard to say no when you dont want to... -Antonio- It´s hard to live, when you don´t want to die.... It´s hard to smile, when the sun doesn´t shine... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, this was really good. . . short and sweet. . . and flirting with the edge. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Julie, Amazon, Antonio, and Sven for your wonderful comments...James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This poem is hot and very agressively expressed. A very good piece! Nathan |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Yes!!! This poem was HOT! What do you say about you heading off to the adult area and making it even hotter hmmmm??..lol. I REALLY enjoyed this one!!! Kat |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Dogg and kat...I couldn't resist that..ha..ha..Alas adult section is not for me...I attempted to leave much to your imagination...James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Nate...I appreciate your response...James |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
So very clever! Enjoyed it-THANKS |
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