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insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

0 posted 2000-07-09 04:56 PM

Love's Genius

You whisper I love you
Sings louder then rain
My heart pumps tame
Your water drips true

Pouring down kisses
Buckets of hugs
Nibbling with tugs
Love making wishes

Sweet sweaty bodes
Breathing intimately
Sharing infinitely
Our souls like gods

You are Venus
Pure as time
A timeless rhyme
You're love's genius

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-07-09 05:02 PM

This is special insect

"You are Venus
pure as time
a timeless rhyme
you're love's genius."

I really like that - great line, great poem, looking for more.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

2 posted 2000-07-09 05:04 PM

after reading unbalanced chemistry this is a change.
well written

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

kat
Member

since 2000-05-20

Posts 387

3 posted 2000-07-10 11:10 PM

So beautiful and romantic
Is a poem such as this
You've written it with such eloquence
One I'm glad I didn't miss

Insect, I must admit that this is one of my favorite one of yours. So beautiful and romantic. I really loved it!!

kat

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2000-07-10 11:23 PM

and with but a whisper
through foggy malaise
a hand reaches touching,
lips licking praise...

Back at U---lovely, insect...

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

5 posted 2000-07-12 12:45 PM

ethome…Thank you I'm glad you liked it.

Prometheus…And they were both written
one after the other. Thanks

kat…Thank you kat I always love to hear
your reply's

serenity…That's beautiful! Thank you

AMaZing
Junior Member

since 2000-06-26

Posts 10

6 posted 2000-07-13 03:04 PM

Great work again....

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

7 posted 2000-07-14 11:26 PM

AmaZing…Thank you for your reply!
                   It would be nice to see one of
                   your poems.

                  Here is an…                             *AMaZing*
                                                                       Welcome
                                                                            To
                                                                        Passions

[This message has been edited by insect (edited 07-14-2000).]

SpitFire
Member Elite

since 2000-04-19

Posts 2396

8 posted 2000-07-14 11:34 PM

~"You are Venus
Pure as time
A timeless rhyme
You're love's genius"......Perfecto!!!

~Mmhhmm Insect,...*High Five*,...for a poem well done. So beautiful. I love buckets of hugs. Cool,cool. *Peace you.

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

9 posted 2000-07-15 10:47 AM

SpitFire…You can have truck loads of hugs.
Thank you SpitFire my friend.
High Five back.
__________________________

Driving through the towns
Weigh stations check the pounds
Safe and sent on their way
A delivery that takes all day

They have to be on time
Because I ordered it for this rhyme
For you SpitFire the drivers will tug
In a convoy truck loads of hugs
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