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Open Poetry #8

Wishing Hearts

Lady Web
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 96
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-09 04:16 PM

A star we wish in the moonlit night
For one day our souls to reunite
In each others arms we long to be
Gazing in each others eyes we see
No need for spoken words
Our hearts communicate a language unheard
Fate continue to keep us apart
Thus not allowing to indulge ours hearts

To feel his hand caress my skin
A touch my heart would recommend
To caress him the same in return
Lingering desires we both do yearn
Would set our bodies and souls afire
Awaiting this union and what will transpire
For now we anxiously wait
For the day our hearts with love we'll consummate

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-07-09 04:57 PM

Very nice lines Lady Web - the waiting is the hard part is'nt it? You really portray a longing in this poem. Very nicely done.

Lady Web
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 96
Houston, Texas

2 posted 2000-07-09 09:42 PM

Thanks Enthome

Good things do come to those who wait
(For awhile anyways)

I'm glad you liked it.

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

3 posted 2000-07-09 09:51 PM

Beautiful

Jamie

Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil.
"Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely".

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2000-07-16 05:34 PM

LadyWeb~
What a lovely line you have tucked away in this one -

'To feel his hand caress my skin
A touch my heart would recommend'

YES !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Lady Web
Member

since 2000-04-12

Posts 96
Houston, Texas

5 posted 2000-07-16 05:55 PM

Prometheus:
Thanks so very much for your reply. I enjoy everyones work here.

Marge:
Always enjoy hearing your replies on my work it is such an honor in its self.
Thanx

[This message has been edited by Lady Web (edited 07-16-2000).]

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