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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia 
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I watched as you walked out my door, After harsh words that hadnt been spoken before. I cried as your car drove away, I didnt know what was going to come come of the next day. My heart sank and tore in two, When I realized there was no longer a you. I knew people would have questions to ask, And I knew answering them would be a huge task. I really dont why why we turned so bad, but the way we ended was so very sad. Im always going to have thoughts of you, But im never going to know if we were really true. You never talked about my unborn child, you see, So, you'll never know what it really meant to me. And you never talked about the hurt you caused, Or my life that was so quickly paused. But in the end, Im bound to heal And my heart will mend. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Beth...... This was truly heartbreaking, and I felt every bit of the hurting... But that's what it's all about... Putting our feelings into words... ~~~thank you for them~~~ Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
Thankyou for all the replies that you have given me Sunny1...your words of encouragement are making it easier to continue writting despite the downfalls.... Again, thankyou very much Beth |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
You have written very eloquently of something so sad. God Bless. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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