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B.C. hang time
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B.C. hang time |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I could sit in this dark space Looking over vast plains That comprise my thoughts And make no sense at all. I could sit here and laugh At the absurd nature of it all The facts of why I came Are becoming all clear. I could sit here and stare At my own worth That has yet to hold balance Sorry, but I'm still in the red. I could sit here, But then again that would'nt be me The one to stir the pot That makes me free. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Michael...what delectable dark thoughts...especially...sorry, but i'm still in the red...loved this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The facts of why I came Are becoming all clear. I could sit here and stare At my own worth That has yet to hold balance Sorry, but I'm still in the red. I could sit here, But then again that would'nt be me The one to stir the pot That makes me free. ----------------- indeed... we have to set our selves free OF ourself... very cool poem Michael lots of soul searching in this road trip.. take care jm |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
when enough ink has hit the paper, resulting in words such as these, you will be in the black. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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