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How Far Can We Go?
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How Far Can We Go? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
How far can we go? Life can be touger, When the things out of hand, How far can we go? now what can we do? When the tears are falling from our eyes, When we fear about the love we had, You didn't want to say a word about the past the years are gone fast, We can't hold a key Because we lost all the dreams we made, We can't unlock our hearts , with a key, Because we've lost everything , Everything we had, Everthing we had, But in our minds, Will remain our memories we had, Don't let that thing end, Life is short, And enough to have memories on our minds, Let the wind blow away, When we've lost everything , How far can we go? When we lost everything, How far can we go? |
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Antonio New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 4Sweden |
How far can we go?? I have asked myself that question many times....and I still dont know the answer... Please let me know if you find it.... I feel with you...thank you!! -Antonio- It´s hard to live, when you don´t want to die.... It´s hard to smile, when the sun doesn´t shine... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Such a sad poem vandanna. Sometimes we have to weather the rain before we see the rainbow. Lovely piece. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Yes indeed how far can we go??? I enjoyed the poem....Thank you.... |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed your poem Vandana. Nicely written. |
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